I can make it a solid 8 if you want to go over parts you've already read that are revised

I can part with 5-8 karma points to critique everything I have, not to mention they all give extra for critiques over 200 words. Would that wet your whistle? cause I could always make more.

Thanks Jeffrey that really helped! For now, I am moving on to my next chapter (I've been working and researching this insanely), but I'll be back later to correct. I've been told it's healthy to take a break.

oh! and if you're looking for karma buildup, my work offers extra, and I'd be happy to throw down a little more for you.

ah very nice very nice. Wise man.

you shy away from controversy? Righttttt Can't WAIT to read more, Jeff. Maybe before you even correct it, you should write something else? that always helps me.

You've got a critique, sir

Tell him I said call me sorry Jeff, I'll look at it today I promise! I got really sick last night and had to go home from class. I get migraines that cause me to throw up some times. Not fun. I didn't want to read your work feeling that way cause I was kind of in a daze I'll come see frank in a few hours

yayyyyyyyy! can't wait! thanks for letting me know

Indeed I have, in fact I just got done. I needed a moment to recover. I loved it.
Do you brag to your friends about how well you write?
If I were you I would!