On Next Time, by Meris Yates:  This was very good.  I wish I was better at writing critiques, but I did not find a thing wrong with this.  U... » Read more...

On Germs, by Erik: I really enjoyed this.  The only slight problem I saw was:  It was E. Coli, there was no doubt   &n... » Read more...

On Esmerelda's hair, by Debbie Kerr:  That was a very good story.  A lot of things happened to that hair.  I must say, I do not have a clue what bu... » Read more...

On Writers blog., by Christobah:  That was absolutley fantastic!  It captured writers block perfectly.  I was in complete agreeance with it fro... » Read more...

On who are all these people?, by missunderstood:  The last time I wrote a blog, it was like this.  I was at the store, creating scenarios and personalities for ever... » Read more...

On The Relief of Writing, by Joe Phelps:  Oh my god.  That was fantastic!  As I read it, I was picturing sex.  Well I suppose having a filthy mind... » Read more...

On The Molester, by Debbie Kerr:    I can't believe things like that happen.  Well I know they happen, but I guess that I just can not at a... » Read more...

On orgasim, by Robin Scott:  I was just slightly disapointed when I read this.  After reading the warning, I was expecting really graphic mater... » Read more...

On Not in a Poem Mood, by Aurora Snow:  This poem is way too long and repetitive.  I see you were trying to capture writer's block, but this can be do... » Read more...

On Necrophilia, by Erik Walker:  Oh my god!  That was absolutely positively stupendous!  I love horror and I love comedy.  It was a great... » Read more...

On My New Best Friend, by Ink Weaver:  That was great.  Personally, I love cats, especially kittens.  I was actually picturing a kitten, as you desc... » Read more...

On Hello, my name is shithead, by Victoria Blevins:  I definately gave you five stars!  That was a great story.  The title grabbed my attention and made me w... » Read more...

On Flowers On Graves, by Joey D.T.:  I loved this poem.  The style & rythym were great.  The subject was interesting and the title was eye cat... » Read more...

On Cannibal Candy Shop, by Erik Walker:  That was excellent!  The title caught my attention, as it should.  While reading it, I wondered where you cam... » Read more...

On Big Bang, by Timothy Uptain:  I liked the subject matter, but personally speaking I didn't care for the style.  Don't change the style t... » Read more...

On A Madman's Whisper, by Angel w o Wings:  I admit, I'm only a poetry writer.  I only read poems all the way through that really grab me from the beginni... » Read more...

On English Lesson, by Quixotic:  That poem is absolutely amazing.  I do not say that about many poems.  I couldn't even fathom the idea of... » Read more...

On Scratching the Surface, by Laurie Paulsen:  That was absolutely amazing!! ... » Read more...

On Late Night Visitor, by Ink Weaver:  That was a great poem.  I didn't give you five stars though.  I only supplied four stars, because of the ... » Read more...