anytime!! and i c now about the 10 syllables thing per stanza. the only reason i said about the lust thing was because they "lock gazes"-- kinda made it seem like they both had the lust for each other, but that was so minor, dont worry about it- great job
~Fainne

excellent! I'm glad you liked it! Strange, when I wrote it I wasn't trying to be funny, but when I read it out loud to my poetry class they all laughed too. Must be the tone I use, anyways laughter is not a bad thing! It's always a great thing to find someone who likes what I write, thank you!

Hello, Jenny. What makes a chapter a chapter is what happens in it as a storyline, like a subplot. A preface cannot be called chapter one because at times, it can outline the problem of a book. I hope this helped you enough. I could not post this on the forums because I was not allowed to do that action. Sorry.

I'm glad you liked the poem! I think it's my greatest work, based on the feedback I keep getting . That's exactly what I hoped to find out, thanks to critics like you! And to answer your question, I'm not a cannibal . I noticed you had poems published, how did you go about doing that? I've always wanted to try the idea, is there anyway you could help explain the process? I've never done it before. Anyways, thanks for reading! Take care!

hi, jenny--
thanks for the feedback!
i'm so glad you liked the story.
and congrats on quitting smoking--that's tough to do!
i look forward to reading something of yours, so let me know when you get posted. welcome!