On Questions, by Natalie Addison:  I have to say that this is one of my favorite poems that I've read on here so far. Then imagry was really well as w... » Read more...

On A Visionary's Vision, by James Barger:  The poem in itself was good though I didnt quite get the idea that you were trying to portray. where you turn makeup i... » Read more...

On Grave Decisions, by Laurie Paulsen:  This piece is good and Im not quite sure where you were going with it but I got two things out of it. One is My white ... » Read more...

On High Tide, by Laurie Paulsen: Opening Comments  I want to say thatI really enjoyed this poem Moods Not really as much as the mood but the tone almo... » Read more...

On Destiny, Chapter 1: Kingdom Brawl, by Logan Eggert:  Have to say better than the second draft. Though I do think it could do with a little more detail, though I am a detail... » Read more...