Jim Kelley
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Thanks for the great criticism, I will definitely start paying more attention to my comma usage. Glad you enjoyed the piece though 
just fyi, more people will read your work if it's broken up into smaller sections
thanks for the comments. i'm waiting for the "invite only" setting before uploading more chapters.
"was she hot?" dude of course she was!
thanks for the comments. i'm waiting for the "invite only" setting before uploading more chapters.
"was she hot?" dude of course she was!
| Name: | jim kelley |
| Sex: | Male |
| Location: | orange county |
| Words Written: | 15069 |
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Jim Kelley wrote a critique for Rise Against, Chapter 1: 1-3.
Jim Kelley published A Beginning.
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124 words - 2 critiques
3628 words - 5 critiquesLatest Critiques and Comments
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On un-born again, by matthew vanhorn: I enjoyed this peice. You conveyed a lifetime in a few
lines. I get the underlying religious meaning but you do not hav... » Read more...
On Rise Against, Chapter 1: 1-3, by Jim Kelley: Rusti,
Yes this is a series and I have the scdond one done. i know a
lot of work has to be done, but the story is... » Read more...
On Broken Wing, by FireFly747: I do not know where you are with your writing, but let
some more fly.
This poem is O.K. and it is well thought out. You... » Read more...
On Unleashed, by Kajikawa Niigata: Ive only read th first couple of pages thus far but am
very intersted in the story.
A few things chopped up tthe read a... » Read more...