On Son of a Hippie, by Dylan Moody: loved it. certainly an enviable life. ... » Read more...

On English Lesson, by Quixotic:  Me likey ... » Read more...

On My Will, by runningsammy: there's definitely a distinct narrative voice. ... » Read more...

On Comatose Prayer, by Nafeesa: Opening Comments  Hi Nafeesa, I would just like to say that your poem is rather philosophically amusing and emotionally... » Read more...

On True Being, by Dawn Rodgers:  I liked it. It really appealed to the meditator inside me. I suggest that you read your poem aloud as it is written and... » Read more...

On Words Have Power..., by Elle St.Clair:  good. ... » Read more...

On Forgotten Regrets, by Elle St.Clair:  nice but too many rhymes with death and breath. ... » Read more...

On Juggling Seals, by Zacchary Tailor:  I liked it. It was absurd, magically real, and imaginative. Truly written by a madman. ... » Read more...

On My Friend Misery, by K. L. Raynor:  Nice spill. But are there any sounds? Is there anything around 'the eyes'? What are these devil eyes? Are they ... » Read more...

On The Jesus Poem, by matthew vanhorn:  I'm impressed, inspired, dazzled, yadda, yadda, yadda. But will it sell? ... » Read more...

On My 'Self', by Robin Scott:  Awesome. Fruity and stupid, but awesome. ... » Read more...

On To my Father, by Mari H.:  This is very affectionate. It almost seems like a letter though. I hope that you have shown your father this. If not, t... » Read more...