Thanks for your critique on St. John, I really appreciate it. I'm really grateful for the time you obviously spent writing that up. In case you're interested, I responded to it point-by-point. Hopefully I'll be able to look at some of your work this weekend and give you some feedback as good as what you gave me.

hi! can't wait to read your chapter!! *runs to add it to reading list*
unfortunately, it'll probably be a few days, if the rest of my week is anything like today. oy. hang in there, nano god.

hey, jordan! yeek! please be gentle with the nano chapter! these things are flawed by nature of the fast flow and lack of deliberate planning . . . at least, mine are.
i'd love for you to read it, of course!! thanks for adding it to your list. can't wait to hear what you think.

I would not say it makes you look foolish. Maybe "picked" while not quite ripe; something we are all guilty of. Keep on writing. It will all come together in its own do time, regardless of our own impatience.

hmm. i know the site's been wonky. could you give me a link to your profile page and i'll give it a try?

Thanks for the interesting critique. Your critique was so thorough and I am really impressed by the insightful points that you've raised. Thanks a ton.

Well, I lied, you may actually see something from me tomorrow. Making critiques was actually faster that I had originally thought they would (granted they might not be that good, but I tried my best ) But I must warn you, the bulk of what I write will be pretty girly, soooo yeah...

A little desperate are we? Well I'm gonna have to dissapoint you, I don't know if you'll be seeing my work THAT soon. But I can promise at least something by the end of this week...hopefully

you're taking on the nano?? cool! if you want to add me as a buddy on the website, i'm lala68. woohoo!!
i haven't looked at the site contest this month, yet. is it nano-related? *runs to see*
(thanks again for the encouragement, jordan--it helps!)

Don't get me wrong, I really liked the ideas behind Recollection with Interest. It left me wanting more. I love stories like that so keep it up. But Unearthed was a great read. Hopefully we will see more from you soon! Are you gonna enter the contest on here for the NaNoWriMo? I have never done it before but I signed up this year, hopefully I can do it. I'm in the middle of a novel right now so I think I'm gonna take a break from that and focus on November here for a while. Best of luck to you and I would love to see what you come up with!