Thank you for the critique on "Twitch". What you said made a lot of sense and I think I just needed someone else to say it because I'm not always completely honest with myself. I will soon be making some serious renovations in that poem.

Ultimate? Goofy?!?! Thy words cut too deep! jk, I guess it is kinda goofy if you think about it. I'm glad that the jargon didn't throw you off too much, as the story is not meant solely for Ultimate players. Thanks for the critique!

Any time, friend!

hey, joshua--
thanks for your comments on 'grave decisions'. i'm glad you laughed, and i'll be sure to rework that vague imagery issue. yay!

Thank you much for the critique. Your advice is sound and appreciated. I will be revising the poem soon based on your feedback.

Hey, Keep writing in a rush as you write so well.

Hi Joshua. I really liked These Two Hours. I havent gotten around to critiquing it yet, I just have so much to do. I will get to it, but I really like reading your works. :] I also want to read your Song of Aedmon Lost, but like I said, I have a lot to do. But keep up the good writing. :]

Hi, Joshua! Thank you for the gift you sent and also for the critique on my poem. I really appreciate your comments.

J.A.T., welcome to Scribophile!
Make yourself @ home with us and don't be shy to come see my works or holla when you got something new for me to read. Holla @ cha boy!

Thanks for the critique! I'll try to get the second part up sometime this week, so I hope not to disappoint you