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On Requiem for a Microbial Armada, by Bob Onnie: The imagery in this poem was great - being ill is never a
pleasant period - but being able to put the time into a poem ... » Read more...
On Requiem for a Microbial Armada, by Bob Onnie: The imagery in this poem was great - being ill is never a
pleasant period - but being able to put the time into a poem ... » Read more...
On Requiem for a Microbial Armada, by Bob Onnie: The imagery in this poem was great - being ill is never a
pleasant period - but being able to put the time into a poem ... » Read more...
On Requiem for a Microbial Armada, by Bob Onnie: The imagery in this poem was great - being ill is never a
pleasant period - but being able to put the time into a poem ... » Read more...
On Requiem for a Microbial Armada, by Bob Onnie: The imagery in this poem was great - being ill is never a
pleasant period - but being able to put the time into a poem ... » Read more...
On Kleenex Box Full of Sugar, Chapter 2: The dance, by Brittany: I liked the zaniness of the writing - it shows how you do
not have to take life so seriously
... » Read more...
On Kleenex Box Full of Sugar, Chapter 3: Old love, by Brittany: I was very impressed with this work - the parallels
between young and old life seem humorous on some level and yet
real... » Read more...