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On Of Straitjackets, Pills and All Things Crazy, Chapter 1: The Zoo Called New York, by Caroline Lowe: Opening Comments
Very nice story. Hopefully some more to the story will be found
(I haven't really looked yet).
Plot
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On The Beast, by Joseph Nagy: This is one of the cutest stories. It's got fear, intrigue and
humor all mixed into one.
The details are great, not too m... » Read more...
On The Heat of Love, Chapter 1: Burning Glow, by Laurie Paulsen: Absolutely beautiful story.
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On Apple Tree, by Ben Jacobson: That was one of the cutest stories I've ever had the pleasure of
reading. Great writing!
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