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Joey D.T.

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I posted the revised version of Flowers On Graves. I hope you like it.

Ariadne President

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HI! I loved The View! You can see that my critique on it. Contact me of you want to reply on the help I gave you in that critique!

Joey D.T.

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Thank you for the critique K.L. I think you're right, the ending is really messy. I wrote that piece in about ten minutes last night. I haven't revised it yet but I'll be sure to let you know when I do. I would love to hear what you have to say about the finished product.

Name:	Katie Raynor
Sex:	Female
Location:	Seattle
Words Written:	696
Hottest Words:	gaze, white, child, eyes, small, beneath

About Me

Occupation:	Student
About Me:	I'm currently in my second year of college as a creative writing major. My hobbies include hiking, travel (which I don't get to do enough) as well as reading and writing, (which I probably do too much).
Favorite Books:	The Great Gatsby, Catch-22, The Grapes of Wrath, To Kill a Mocking Bird, Cry The Beloved Country, As I Lay Dying, Catcher in the Rye, Life of Pie, White Noise, Sense and Sensibility, The Lord of the Rings Trilogy.
Favorite Quotes:	"What lies behind us and what lies before us are small matters compared to what lies within us." - Ralph Waldo Emerson "Let the beauty we love be what we do. There are hundreds of ways to kneel and kiss the ground." - Rumi
Loves:	I love Seattle and spending as much time as possible outdoors hiking, camping, canoeing and such, but when it's rainy- this is Seattle after all- I love to spend my time indoors curled up with a good book.

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June 12

K. L. Raynor edited Appearances.

K. L. Raynor edited My Friend Misery.

March 26

K. L. Raynor edited Strength.

March 21

K. L. Raynor published Strength.

K. L. Raynor wrote a critique for Flowers On Graves, by Joey D.T..

March 20

K. L. Raynor wrote a critique for Essence of Crystal, by A J Salvucci.

K. L. Raynor voted.

K. L. Raynor wrote a critique for tears, by missunderstood.

K. L. Raynor wrote a critique for I Tried, by Zach Kern.

K. L. Raynor voted.

K. L. Raynor wrote a critique for The [other] Bed, by Dear Daisy.

K. L. Raynor wrote a critique for "I AM", Chapter 1: "I AM", by Traci Jeanee Smith.

K. L. Raynor wrote on Joey D.T.'s scratchpad.

March 19

K. L. Raynor edited The View.

Latest Works

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This is a poem I wrote inspired by the painting "A Sunday Afternoon on The Island of La Grande Jatte" by Georges Seurat. Any feedback would be most appreciated! » Read...

My Friend Misery

drama, poetry

A poem; short and to the point. Any critiques would be more than welcome! » Read...

Strength

non-fiction, drama, poetry

This is a sonnet I wrote about the birth of my nephew. Any input would be most appreciated! (Particularly in regard to the second stanza which I'm not totally happy with). » Read...

The View

poetry

A short poem about a place of special significants to me. I thought I would share it with you all, and see what you think. » Read...

Latest Critiques and Comments

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On Flowers On Graves, by Joey D.T.: This is a terrific revision! This line especially, Sweet Scorsese, thank you for the silver screen attractions. This ... » Read more...

On Essence of Crystal, by A J Salvucci: I really enjoyed this piece! I must confess, I didn't realize the war being referenced was the Vietnam war until th... » Read more...

On tears, by missunderstood: This is a very emotionally charged poem! I think you've done a great job expressing one aspect of heartbreak. My on... » Read more...