On Flowers On Graves, by Joey D.T.:  This is a terrific revision! This line especially, Sweet Scorsese, thank you for the silver screen attractions. This ... » Read more...

On Essence of Crystal, by A J Salvucci:  I really enjoyed this piece! I must confess, I didn't realize the war being referenced was the Vietnam war until th... » Read more...

On tears, by missunderstood:  This is a very emotionally charged poem! I think you've done a great job expressing one aspect of heartbreak. My on... » Read more...

On I Tried, by Zach Kern:  Great work! This is a very powerful piece. You have some great imagery throughout. I particularly liked the first line:... » Read more...

On The [other] Bed, by Dear Daisy:  What a great piece! It seems loosely based on a villanelle which is nice. There's some wonderful imagery in this po... » Read more...

On "I AM", Chapter 1: "I AM", by Traci Jeanee Smith:  Traci, this is a very powerful piece! It is clear you are very passionate about the topic which comes through greatly i... » Read more...

On I am Free, by Sylvia Burke: What a great poem! Very interesting subject matter. I really liked your form in this poem, with the large gap between the fir... » Read more...

On The Fox Prince: An Original Fairytale, Chapter 1, by Katica Locke: What a fun story! You clearly have a great imagination and a knack for the traditional-style fairy tales. I have a few minor ... » Read more...

On Flowers On Graves, by Joey D.T.: I thought this poem was very unique! I really liked the bit of science you incorporated. You don't often get that from a ... » Read more...

On The Specialist, Chapter 1: 1. Tokyo, by Jackie Dean Godsey: Wow. What an intriguing work! It is all very mysterious, which I assume is the tone you're going for. Parts of it, howeve... » Read more...

On Germs, by Erik: I really enjoyed this piece. It was playful and ominous at the same time. It shows great talent to be able to carry out both ... » Read more...

On The View, by K. L. Raynor: Thank you all so much for you're wonderful comments! The critiques were very useful. Just to clarify one point, "The Casc... » Read more...

On But My Tears, by J Charles Silko: This poem is very powerful! I particularly liked the imagery in stanza 3 but it has silenced my screams it has cut out my to... » Read more...

On Foolish, by Ashley: I really enjoyed this poem. It was very emotionally powered which I think is a great asset when writing poetry. You have some... » Read more...

On A Missing Dimension, by Dear Daisy: This is a very unique poem, and very interesting to read! I really liked line six: Their tone, a hymn of a foreign reed song... » Read more...

On The Fish Plastique, by Allie Hueperts:  This is a very interesting poem. I particularly liked lines ten through twelve The face was plastic in response, a sma... » Read more...

On Requiem for a Microbial Armada, by Bob Onnie:  I thought this poem was excellent! You have some great use of imagery throughout. Some of my favorite images in the poe... » Read more...