I posted the revised version of Flowers On Graves. I hope you like it.

HI! I loved The View! You can see that my critique on it. Contact me of you want to reply on the help I gave you in that critique!

Thank you for the critique K.L. I think you're right, the ending is really messy. I wrote that piece in about ten minutes last night. I haven't revised it yet but I'll be sure to let you know when I do. I would love to hear what you have to say about the finished product.