Kaiehl Scott


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Hey thanks for the critique you were right on about a lot of things. I can't take all the credit though for the narration and discription stuff, a lot of people on here helped with that
hi, kaiehl--
welcome to scribophile!
thanks for your thoughtful critique of my 'retribution' story.
i appreciate your suggestion about watching those passive verbs...oh, how i fall prey to them...i'll choose more deliberately in reworking.
i'm looking forward to reading your story--i'm a sucker for americana.
(i also love that one of your "hot words" is "uh".
)
thanks again!
welcome to scribophile!
thanks for your thoughtful critique of my 'retribution' story.
i appreciate your suggestion about watching those passive verbs...oh, how i fall prey to them...i'll choose more deliberately in reworking.
i'm looking forward to reading your story--i'm a sucker for americana.
(i also love that one of your "hot words" is "uh".
thanks again!
'sup dude. welcome to the site.
| Name: | Kaiehl Scot |
| Sex: | Male |
| Location: | Denton, TX |
| Words Written: | 1570 |
| Hottest Words: | head, window, burger, turned, car, uh |
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Kaiehl Scott wrote a critique for Tales of the Justinia: Raine's Folly, Chapter 3: Mercs, by The Geek.
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A night in the life of one modern man. » Read...
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On Voice, by Matt Mumau: all and all -- a very good poem that
does convey s strong narrative to the reader. this obvio... » Read more...
On intoxication, by mavimtrak:
-- first, let me say that i like your poem and i like the
idea that i think is behind it or embedded wi... » Read more...
On The Assignment, by Phedre:
-- Watch out for the dreaded 'to be' verb. it's not
always wrong, but it could usuall... » Read more...
On Tales of the Justinia: Raine's Folly, Chapter 3: Mercs, by The Geek: Overall, I would say that I enjoyed the scene – though as
short as it is there's not all that much to really comm... » Read more...



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