Kajikawa Niigata


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Thanks for the comment. =D
No problem, I know you were just trying to help, and brutal honesty can be a virtue. In the future, though, remember that giving detailed suggestions for improvement is a virtue, too. If you know something's wrong, letting the writer know how to do what's right is helpful. I just hope your experience with that story doesn't prevent you from reading my other writings.
Thanks for the fandom. I am sorry that it took me so long to acknowledge it-- I eason vacation- also was a little confused since the few pieces I had have been removed-but I appreciate it nonetheless.
I am very pleased to hear my story left you feeling empty.
Your ideas of the novel Reset were very good! I wish to hear from you sometime today and I hope you read my works on my profile (Click my name). Take care!
Wow, Kajikawa thanks for the brutal but honest critique. While your words appear to be lacking in couth I understand my dereliction for publishing something with such obvious mistakes. I hope I haven’t turned you off from reading any of my other works and welcome any future critiques. -Dylan Moody
| Name: | Kajikawa Niigata |
| Sex: | Male |
| Location: | London, England |
| Words Written: | 8124 |
| Hottest Words: | james, shaun, heathfield, crawford, eyes, face |
About Me
| Occupation: | Science journalist. |
| About Me: | I'm a twenty-something male with degrees in physics and chemistry. |
| Interests: | Science, space, stars, snowboarding, sunshine, sleep. |
| Favorite Movies: | No Country for Old Men. |
| Favorite TV Shows: | House, Death Note, Lost. |
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Kajikawa Niigata published Deliverance.

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Latest Works
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Two Anglican priests attend to a disturbance at a mental hospital in rural England. » Read...
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[4300 words, Short Story]
James is an ordinary student, but his life will change forever at the rock concert of the century. » Read...
James is an ordinary student, but his life will change forever at the rock concert of the century. » Read...
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On Deliverance, by Kajikawa Niigata: Thanks for the comments guys, I made a few adjustments based on
your suggestions.
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On Deliverance, by Kajikawa Niigata: Glad you enjoyed it! You are probably right, the ending is
rather abrupt, and I actually wrote another two pages, with a
poli... » Read more...
On Oil and Water, by Jase Jayne: Hi. I like this a lot, but I think you need to read it aloud to
yourself. If you do that - imagine you were giving it as a sp... » Read more...
On Of Gods and Men, Chapter 1: Prologue Part 1, by Britain Roush: Hmm, well I won't sugar-coat my thoughts. If you wrote this 18
months ago and don't really care for it, then I suppos... » Read more...







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