On The Night Of Red Tide, by CJ Jayne: Well, to start things off, I'd like to mention that "horizion" is actually spelled "horizon." Just me being anal. But as ... » Read more...

On Memento Amore, by Inkblot Scribe: Modern takes on classic figures have been done time and time again, but I think you did well with this. A cynical Cupid, shoo... » Read more...

On Taking A Chance?, by CJ Jayne: I can understand the content, as I've gone through something like this myself, but I think the poem could use a little wo... » Read more...