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Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith

1160 • Inkmaster

Hi Karen,

I've gone back and re-critiqued your story. Hopefully you find this second one more helpful.

The Geek

1157 • Inkmaster

Thanks for your critiquing of BV, but a suggestion I have: no need to make the comment that you've won an award for a poem while critiquing someone else's work, it's somewhat in bad taste.

Laurie Paulsen

1891 • Wordsmith

hi, karen--
welcome to scribophile!
thanks for reading and commenting on my poem--i appreciate your suggestions!

Name:	Karen Peralta
Sex:	Female
Location:	Seattle
Birthday:	Jun. 1, 1960
Words Written:	2018
Hottest Words:	pretty, girl, care, big, day, handsome

About Me

Occupation:	ghost writer, ghostwriter, copy editor, copyeditor, proof reader, proofreader, freelance writer, copy writer, publishing assistant, website creator and developer
About Me:	I have been writing professionally for well over twenty years, and I own Rainbow Writing, Inc., a pro ghost writing agency. We are always hiring talented ghosts and editors.
Interests:	writing, art, hiking, swimming, reading
Publications:	www.rainbowriting.com and www.bookauthorswriters.com, plus "The Crusader" magazine, and I've been published in Twisted Tongue, Literary Magic, the Jimston Journal and many other magazines.

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October 6

karenperalta commented on Just a Disabled Little Girl.

October 5

karenperalta deleted A Disabled Little Girl.

karenperalta deleted A Pretty Disabled Little Girl.

karenperalta published Just a Disabled Little Girl.

karenperalta wrote a critique for Cud, by Debbie Kerr.

karenperalta wrote a critique for Bigtop Dreams, by Laurie Paulsen.

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Just a Disabled Little Girl

october contest, short story, horror fiction, handicapped story

This is for the October Horror Contest. She's just a disabled little girl, but you wouldn't like her when she gets angry. Even though she is pretty...so very, very pretty. » Read...

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On Just a Disabled Little Girl, by karenperalta: First of all, to explain to everybody: I'm disabled myself. I'm not in a wheelchair, but I know several people ... » Read more...

On Cud, by Debbie Kerr: This poem was wonderful and I really can't think of anything you can do to improve it...well, I can try. I think the line... » Read more...

On Bigtop Dreams, by Laurie Paulsen: This poem I believe creates the desired effect of a kind of horrific combined with an "arty" feeling, and it was superb in it... » Read more...