Hi Kat,

Thanks for the critique--good catches on those missing and misspelled words. I've only read over that story a dozen times or so and never even saw them. I too am a Pagan, so what do I know about gods and demons?

Thanks, too, for your advice.

~Blessings

i am not going to publish anything on this site for a while, as i have reached my basic membership limit of 5 works. however, if you want to recieve any continuations, or see new works, email me (email's on my profile) and lemme know !! thanks, ~Fainne

thanks so much for the critique on lost sister! yes, i see how inserting the 'a' would make it flow a little easier. thanks again!!!
~Fainne
ps: check out my other works and let me know what you think!!!

Yea spelling is NOT my strong point, one of the resons I joined Scribophile. Thanks for the words of help!

Hi Kathleen,

Thank you for the crtique and I am pleased you enjoyed the story. The Succubus was based on a real person--a former fiancee who actually did suck the life from me and left me an empty shell for many years. But, she made a perfect Succubus for the story.

Thank you for your comment. I like knowing that other people understand that it is hard to write something that personal and from the heart. I am sorry for the people who had to experience this but it is also a very good life lesson.

Hello! When you have time please read, The Boys of Summer -and tell me what you think.

Kathleen,

Thank you for the message. I will read over the rest of that story and let you know what I think. Have also posted one short story so far--a dream/horror piece.

Actually I haven't been really involved in script frenzy. When I saw the name I had assumed it was a circle for screenplay writers.

hey can you give my poem a rank so i can put another one up right now!