Katica my old friend, I miss you.
I've made even more changes to the FFF, so if you decide to come back check out my forum post on the topic, or just let me know and I'll clue you in.
Ciao.

-Ben

Hey Katica,
I know your incommunicado for a while but when you come back check out the FFF. We've made some changes to make it more productive.
-Ben

Hey Katica! would you please read my first work: Island Conspiracy (prologue and Chapters 1+2) and give me some feedback! i would really appreciate. i am making a note to read your works asap, so please read mine too!
~Fainne
ps i am publishing this in stores sometime next fall... so please help me out with the time thing

Hey Katica,
No stress about the FFF. We'll be here when you're ready. I tried to split my attention between a Script Frenzy script and my story this week and the results are not great for either, so I understand.
-Ben

hi, katica--
just wanted to let you know i'm planning on critiquing 'journey's end' soon! i've been waiting for the opportunity to sit down and give it some quality time.

Hi, Katica! There is a story I have published called A Heart of Ice, Part 1. You can come and read it now.

I have Tragic Hearts Chapter 1: Black Heart of Temptation done, so read and critique it!

I have a story for you on my profile on Dragon Circle called Romeo and The Temptress(Prologue)

Hello Katica Locke. What you said about Sinclair about him not being human, you are right. He is an angel whose heart is tainted by temptation and sin. That is where I got the name Sin-clair. Also the setting of the story is the valentine's day festival. I will contact you once I have the story done. If you liked it, then give it a high rating because I am publishing this in stores around in May.

Hello, Katica. I have just joined you circle! Read my works sometime on them okay? I will critique on yours. I promise!

hi, katica--
thanks for your critique!
you have a good point about redundancy. regardless of my intention, if the effect is one of unnecessary repetition, i need to fix that!
the good news is, after this week we get to edit, rewrite and add as much onto our stories as we like. i do better with more room to ramble.
thanks again for your feedback--i appreciate the suggestions.

Hello Katica,

I love your name. Anyway, thanks for taking up the challenge of FFF. Don't worry, there is no real pressure I just want a reason to write weekly. I'm a big procrastinator. Looking forward to your first piece.
-Ben

Thanks so much for your input! I edited the piece a bit if you're interested.

Hey,

Thanks for the thoughtful feedback...I certainly appreciate it.