Where'd you go?

thanks, for reading some of my june challenge entries, Katrin. i appreciate your feedback. ( :

Hey, I just finished my June 11-14 chapter. The third story is crap, but the last story is another kid story. I was wondering if you'd let me know what you think?

Thanks for the encouragement! Second chapter will be up as soon as I finish it.

No embarrassment necessary, really. It's tough to proofread your own work. It always looks right in your head because you know what it's supposed to say. I thought it was a really good piece though

Thank you for the very kind words on "Hyjinx". It does need some polishing. After I'm done rewriting the story I'm working on, maybe I'll revisit the chaotic duo. Thank you!

Thanks for reading and commenting on "The First-Timer." I"m glad you liked it Let me know when you publish something, and I'd be glad to give it a read. --dnm