Kirsten,

Just a friendly suggestion. If you plan on leaving a critique, please leave something constructive, rather than a rant.

To my understanding, the purpose of this website is for us build up one another in our writing, and that is difficult to do when we give one another bitter rants with no purpose to them.

That said, thanks for taking a look, and know that I am currently doing a LOT of revising .

-Strider212

Thank you for your kind comments!

Actually, I haven't seen What's Eating Gilbert Grape. It's on my list, definitely.

Kirsten, if you don't like someone's work or have suggestions, please try to have some manners. We are all here to receive helpful feedback on our work, and we can all be mature about it. your critique and your comment on my latest post here were just mean, to the point where I didn't even think it was worth it to read them all the way through. If someone can't handle themselves maturely, I don't really care what they have to say.

i just doublechecked and i can't believe i neglected to respond to your critique, kirsten. thppt on me!
i just reread your comments, and am gratified you really 'got' the point of my 'return' story. thank you for your helpful suggestions regarding the confusing spots, and your encouragement for the spots you felt i wrote well. you rock!!

It's Friday. Post 'em if you got 'em.

-Ben

Reading your critiques is like watching an erotic exchange. I love it. They may not always make the most sense , but they are always a good ride .

Hey Kirsten! Thanks so much for you great critique on my work. It is very helpful and I love this place. Now I'm off to go check out your personal website and probably add them to mine!

Hello Kirsten,
Just a reminder to critique two stories from the FFFF circle (What I Know by Louisa should be one of them) and then post that you've done it on the forum. You have until Friday.
Thanks,
-Ben