I have a song called "Lonely Heart" published. You can read it when you get the chance.

Thank you for the critique and the grammatical corrections I just got a new computer and haven't put in enough time to find the program I need to check that stuff , I am really bad at it.

I got your critique and I just wanna say thank you and glad you like it. I'll have more coming up soon.

Thanks for the critique!!

Thanks for the post! she's meant to be insane, the more over the top she is portrayed as being, the better. besides, she's just an ass, can't have an ass unless they're completely blatant about being one.