On Dirty Laundry, by Elle St.Clair: Opening Comments It's beautiful and heartfelt.  It expresses true sadness.   It shows how all our sensati... » Read more...

On This Night, by xjruss: Trust me, we've all had days like that.  You're not alone at all.  Ever had your heart beating so fast that... » Read more...

On Her Smile was Worn, by Nafeesa: That is a beautiful poem.  It is very sad and shows the emotions of the girl very simply.  Mention of the rain remi... » Read more...

On Aphrodite, by Steven E.A.: Opening Comments This story makes me want to argue.  I think it is probably a very controversial story because it has a... » Read more...

On Untitled, Chapter 1: Departure, by Taylor Smith: This is the saddest thing ever.  I love the perspective from the child.  The scenes are very vivid and descriptive.... » Read more...

On Cheerful Breakfast, by Kyle Morrison: Opening Comments It's sweet.  This poem reminds me of childhood somehow. Plot The cooking of breakfast shows a br... » Read more...

On Taking Time, by Eli Hart: It's very sweet.  It shows the fear in the main character's heart.  I like the rhyming scheme.  It flo... » Read more...

On Esmerelda's hair, by Debbie Kerr: Opening Comments It was an adorable children's story.  It was vivid and humorous. Plot The plot was funny and the... » Read more...

On I wonder about you, by Sherry. Attwood: I like how some of the stanzas are repeated.  The language is vivid and captures the reader's attention.  I lov... » Read more...

On Letter From A Broken Heart, by Vinny Balducci: It was very heartfelt.  I love the descriptions about the dreams and past regrets.  I love how you live in the past... » Read more...

On Let Zeus Record, by William Craig:  It's extremely sweet and reminds me of the times my heart was broken.  The way the main character acts at the ... » Read more...

On Sidewalk Meeting, by Shane Gannaway: It is too centered on smiling and eye contact.  You don't have to repeat yourself.  Describe what you see in th... » Read more...

On Why I didn't finish my essay on time., by Brittany: I love how it really describes the pain a college student has to go through.  Writing ridiculous essays and having insan... » Read more...