Why should it matter if it's public/restricted? Let's put it another way, why might it matter?

Well, don't scap it... I liked the darkness of it, I found it sexy. Lemme know when it goes back up.

Lol! Oh, man, you had me laughing at the last line.

I *might've* mellowed out a little bit. I don't think I'm as sarcastic anymore in my crits. But maybe that's a good thing.

...Nahhh.

I guess I'll have to step it up again.

Haha, goober. Nope, went to college for one year and quit. I went through a massive writer's block I think and just stopped visiting all the sites I'm registered at.

But I'm back. And about to post something.

Don't tell me you missed me?

College!?

I haven't been to college in years, fool! Just busy working two jobs and playing video games, haha.

helleo

There are a lot more published writers there. However, it is the second best place for crits (scrib for some reason, word length I think, has the slightly better crits). But recently, I've gotten some amazing advice from published authors at CC and I've even had an ex-editor tell me out of the blue I should try to market in a particular market because she liked my piece. So good people...but a little harder to find the folks.

heh you know all those suggestions you keep asking about or suggestions are basically done on critiquecircle. saving drafts, combing inline crits for easier editing, personal queues so you can put whole or partial novels up, etc.

Hi Laos! Just stopping by to thank you for your critique. I especially found your remarks regarding the format of the second piece to be valuable and am going to try changing it up to see how it works. I'll be looking out for you in hopes of returning the favor!

Okay, thanks for the clarification