laos! my man!
haven't seen you around for a little while...what're you up to? getting any writing done?

Hello Laos/Dominic,

I'm tweaking the FFF to make it more rigorous. Check out my recent forum post for more info. We would love to have you come along.

-Ben

congrats on critiquer of the month ( :

I really like your writing from what I've read so far. Please keep adding more stories!

Thanks for the critique on The Beast. Its meant to be like a camp fire story, that's why its so vague. but you're right, i should work on it more. thanks for the suggestions!

hey, dude! congratulations on being announced Supremo Critiquer Fantastico for June!!

Congrats on your Super Critiquer title

hey, laos--
thanks for the stupendous critique! this is what i'm talkin' about.
i appreciate you taking such time and care with my chapter, giving it to me straight.
i see what you mean about the 'lone man' being a distraction, and you've convinced me. he'd do better to show up a little later, present more as a looming threat on the horizon rather than sitting right in the boy's lap at the outset.
i'll be referring back to your other suggestions as well, as i rework. so much to do!
thanks again--so much!

Not a problem man. keep pumping out those stories.

gehee! thanks for the birthday wishes, laos!