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On Requiem for a Microbial Armada, by Bob Onnie: This was really fun and interesting to read. It is clever,
well written and the flow is effortless for the reader. ... » Read more...
On Tonight, Tomorrow, by Christine C: I really liked this one. It was very pretty, and
the imagery was exceptional.
... » Read more...
On In a Crowded Room, by Jenny: This was a good plot, short and sweet. The pacing was good, the
first stanza was my favorite. The second and third I fe... » Read more...
On Unwind, by Chelsi Brown: I appreciated your emotion and honesty in this poem. I agree,
and you are already aware, that it is somewhat disjointed in
sp... » Read more...
On Death of the West, by Tom Elswood: I enjoyed reading this I was immediately drawn into the
setting of a destroyed, hopeless land. I can feel the de... » Read more...
On True Being, by Dawn Rodgers: I liked this poem. You described it as one that came out of
nowhere, and I think that's to be appreciated. I get the sens... » Read more...