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Lauren,

Your thoughts on my story, Iron Arcadia, are well-taken! I felt everything you had to say was useful, and it's helping me notice other things I need to adjust. Thanks again!

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hey, lauren--
thanks for your comments on my story! so glad to get feedback, and i'm happy you enjoyed this short lil thing.

to answer one of your questions, scratch is another name for the devil--he was referred to as Old Scratch a long time ago.

welcome to scribophile and thanks again!

Name:	Lauren Ortencio
Sex:	Female
Location:	California
Words Written:	888
Hottest Words:	lilian, eggs, woman, days, home, feel

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Vivid Elegance, Chapter 1: Carei of Sveten, Chapter 1: Vivid Elegance, Chapter 1: Carei of Sveten

humor, fiction, fantasy, young adult

Daniel is a 17-year-old, peasant boy who finds the people and occurrences in his environment either fervently loathsome or uncontrollably hilarious. Little does he know, the blood which courses through his supposedly peasant veins glimmers a vibrant... » Read...

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On Vivid Elegance, Chapter 1: Carei of Sveten, Chapter 1: Vivid Elegance, Chapter 1: Carei of Sveten, by Lauren Ortencio: Thanks for the tips, guys. I'll be working on my second draft to clear out the adverb clutter, unconventional... » Read more...

On Iron Arcadia, Chapter 1: The Wake, by Inkblot Scribe: There are several grammatical errors that need to be fixed, however I will only list a few, for the errors seem repeti... » Read more...

On The Assignment, by Phedre: Was it as good for you as it was for me, baby?” He asked as he took a quick picture for proof of time of death. &nb... » Read more...