Thanks for the welcome! ^-^

And I'm over the moon because I took a "leap of faith", ha ha. (I don't know if you're a RENT fan or not; I just happen to like that part quite a bit.)

I think this site is amazing and I wish I'd found it earlier. It's just what I've needed. I just have to critique something already so I can publish!

Hi Laurie -- thanks for the message. Yes... I'm concentrating on my novels at the moment. Couple of domestic things going too. I'll be up and running again when I manage to organise myself! Love, Dom.

Thanks for the welcome!

Hey Laurie,
Thanks! I'm actually taking an online Photoshop class this summer and that was the assignment I did today. Totally abstract, but I thought, "Hey, a Scribophile Avatar!" The one before that was a doodle from years ago that I just dug up. I'm trying to keep them Ben-made and rotating them out. I don't know if that helps me or hurts me as far as being recognizable, but who cares. It's fun.

-Ben

Howdy-

Thanks for your thorough critique. I was aiming for a story that everyone could apply their own experience to, which is why I didn't elaborate much on either character. I'll certainly use your comments if I decide to edit or add to it.

thanks again!
-matt

Glad to critique, your poem really was a good read. I am considering entering the contest. Do I need to rack up any karma points or anything else to enter?

I am really glad I picked up your Heat of Love. I am interested to see where it leads. Great description and attention to detail in most places. Can't wait to read more.

Hey, you are welcome. It was a pleasure reading your poem, so I thought it'd be nice to give you my input on it. And thanks for the welcoming. (And I'm guessing you are a fan of Poohbear and Firefly too? Hard to find that combination).

I have to watch the show alone because my sister doesn't like to watch the acctual show. Just the auditions.
I wish I could dance the contestants on the show. They're amazing!