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1., WELCOME TO SCRIBOPHILE!!!
2., Thank you for reading and critiquing my Choker. I'll take your points in consideration, though I'll have to forego the "reading out loud" suggestion - it's a bit difficult to pull off without the ability to hear.
BUT, thank you! Believe me, the ending would have been with a graphic description of Karen's death... but alas, I must follow the teacher's requirements. *sigh*
I'll wait till the class reviews the story before making any other changes.
Thanks again! *plops some sweet treats in front of you* Enjoy!
2., Thank you for reading and critiquing my Choker. I'll take your points in consideration, though I'll have to forego the "reading out loud" suggestion - it's a bit difficult to pull off without the ability to hear.
BUT, thank you! Believe me, the ending would have been with a graphic description of Karen's death... but alas, I must follow the teacher's requirements. *sigh*
I'll wait till the class reviews the story before making any other changes.
Thanks again! *plops some sweet treats in front of you* Enjoy!
Thank you very much for the critique on my latest work. I'm not sure what I'm going to do with it, but if I turn it into a short story I'll let you know 
Thanks again!
Thanks again!
| Name: | Leroy Dumont |
| Sex: | Male |
| Location: | Santa Cruz County, California, USA |
| Birthday: | Apr. 26, 1935 |
| Words Written: | 6636 |
About Me
| Occupation: | Retired and devoted to writing. |
| About Me: | Born at Ahualoa, Hamakua, Hawaii. Graduated Saint Louis College, Oahu, Hawaii. Attended Harbor Junior College, Wilmington, California. Attended Yale University, New Haven, Connecticut. Edited and published a bimonthly community newspaper during the 1960s and 1970s in the Los Angeles Harbor Area. Also edited a local color monthly magazine during the same period. Ran a PR firm primarily involved in political campaigns. Served as Special Liaison for a Southern California Congressman. |
| Interests: | Extremely varied but primarily science oriented a la geophysics, astrophysics and electronics on the heavy side - deistic religious perspectives, raja yoga, voodoo and witchcraft on the "lighter" side. |
| Favorite Books: | Since grade school: Treasure Island. Others too many to list. |
| Favorite Movies: | Terminator, Diehard, Death Wish, Wizard of Oz, Fantasia (go figure?) |
| Favorite TV Shows: | The only intelligent one: Sponge Bob. |
| Favorite Quotes: | "If you can't stand the heat, get out of the kitchen." Harry S. Truman |
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October 30
leroy dumont voted.
leroy dumont deleted Scorpion Soup.
leroy dumont deleted KEEPER OF THE SEAL.
April 4
leroy dumont published KEEPER OF THE SEAL, Chapter 1: Keeper of the Seal.
April 1
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leroy dumont wrote a critique for How Come Kanaka.
March 28
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March 26
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400 words - 4 critiques
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On The Choker (Short Story Version), by Phedre: Your opening should be more active while being
descriptive. Too many statements make it a bit jerky. To
illustrate,&nbs... » Read more...
On A Heart of Ice, Part 5, by Ariadne President: whose heart, when touched by the forces of love it
dies out like a withering rose that had just recently lost its
brilli... » Read more...
On How Come Kanaka, by leroy dumont: I initially wrote this as a mini-blog to my six sons who
are scattered about the country and keep in touch by email.&nb... » Read more...
On The Best Jumper, by Brittany: Great story. I loved it. Others already have
commented on most of things I would have said; however, I'... » Read more...