Oh, Lilli, you have just made my day! Thank you so much!

Thanks for adding The Jacksonville Incident to your reading list. I published Great Expectations too and it's had no votes, and no critiques.
So again thanks!

Thanks Lilli for the kind words. I have very ambivalent feelings about Carroll and his mother his mother too. I'll have to see where this takes me.

Lilli - thanks for the critique! I can tell you, Dagny definitely is a ball of fun to write about...

Have a good one,
Ryan

Thanks for the critique, you got the meaning right on! I am excited to read some of your work i'm just finishing up studying for finals so it might be another day or two until i get to it. Thank you once again!

Thank you, Lilli - I'll try not to disappoint you. I'll watch for your writings too. Gppd luck.

xvermonter

Hey Lilli, welcome to Scribophile!! Thanks for becoming a fan.