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On The [other] Bed, by Dear Daisy: I like the piece but I don't think I interpret it the same way as the others. When I read the line: Beside a body formall... » Read more...
On Your Purest Fantasy, by Eli Hart: Opening Comments I really like this poem. I've read it several times over the past few days. Moods I don't know if... » Read more...
On Writing a Scene with Dagny, by Ryan Edel: I have to tell you, I've never read anything quite like this before.  It's interesting and yet bordering on insa... » Read more...
On I am, by RLyn: I really enjoyed reading this piece and that is due to being made aware of its premise.  Knowing what precipitated its b... » Read more...