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On Harlem's Humidor, by Artiste Gullible: Very witty--it didn't hit me until the description of the single
cigar. Then all the other clues started to fall in... » Read more...
On Grandad's Toolbox, by Joshua Burgess: Thank you so much for this simple, moving memory. That's
almost what it was for me--not only because this reminded ... » Read more...
On Janet Starts a Fire, by Laurie Paulsen: I'm still marveling at the way my senses are all perked up from
this story. You engaged them all--the scent of the ... » Read more...
On Too Far, by Diabetic.Coma: Wow...I'm stunned by the explosive force of this piece.
You have really captured the horror of violence, and the
he... » Read more...
On Obsessions, Chapter 1, by Joseph Nagy: Okay, you had me at "I don't know why you people chose to judge
me." I'm already intrigued--who are the people?... » Read more...
On June Challenge (June 13-16), by Laurie Paulsen: I'm so glad I found these little vignettes--I love them! I
adore snapshots of the macabre, and "Michelle Wakes" is ... » Read more...
On Sink Dreams, by Aleki Suibhne: I suppose one of the things that really stood out to me was the
feeling of being present in this poem. The
slipperiness... » Read more...