Thanks for reading my story and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate your time.

hi, lee--
thank you for the wonderful feedback on 'janet starts a fire'.
i see what you mean about the clunky sentence, and will go fiddle with it asap.
i'm so pleased you enjoyed the story!

holy smokes, lee--
thanks so much for the lovely comments! i'm looking forward to reading 'game over'--will let you know what i think!

hi, lee--

welcome! you sound like a hoot.

Hello Lee,

I love the Slinkies quote. Brilliant! Where did you get it from? Oh yeah, and welcome to Scribophile.

-Ben

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