On High Tide, by Laurie Paulsen:  Well, hello there, names Logan and i read your poem, well to put it frankly, i liked it. I didnt love it, i thought the... » Read more...

On Voices, Chapter 0: Prologue, by Natalie Addison: Opening Comments  Well, im back just like i said i would be. and this is actually a prologue instead of a poem, so may... » Read more...

On Boomerang, by Bob Onnie:  Hello, im writing this critique to ure poem, and im sorry to say that i suck at writing critiques for poems, so if it s... » Read more...

On Questions, by Natalie Addison: Opening Comments   Hello, well this is my first critique of a poem, so bear with me... Themes   i could easily u... » Read more...

On Upon Being Preached Taoism In Highschool, by Timothy Uptain:  Well, not much can be said about this work... I thought it would be interesting to read, because i myself am atheist an... » Read more...

On One Romeo, Two Juliets, by Ariadne President:  Well, i told you i was going to critique some of yur works, and well here it is. While i was browsing your works, ... » Read more...

On Musings (working title), Chapter 1, by Fainne Grant:   i loved, an excellent job, as always. i love the amount of details that you used in the chapter. the idea that you sta... » Read more...

On tears, by missunderstood:  normally im not really a fan of peotry, this poem caught my eye and despite its lack of length, it makes up for with ra... » Read more...

On Chronicles of Odralon, Chapter 0: Part 1: Prologue, by Fainne Grant:  wow,  i loved ure work. it was an excellent beginning to the start of wat hoes to be a triumphant and mystically s... » Read more...