Hello Louisa,

Sorry to see you go from the FFFF. I hope you find a better match for yourself (although I thought you fit in very well). We'll be around if you ever get interested in Flash Fiction again.

Much love,
-Ben

hi, louisa--
i was thinking about your writing, your style and chosen topics, and i wonder if you'd be interested in joining brian mattock's humanist writing circle? there's just the two of us so far, and i think you'd be a great addition to the mix. maybe check it out?
thanks, nice lady.

hi, louisa--
thank you for such thoughtful comments for 'return'! gives me much to chew on as i think about my next story.

It's time to post for FFFF, Louisa. I'm looking forward to your piece.
-Ben

I appreciate your kind invitation to the ffff, Louisa, and I feel good about being thought of as member material. However, I must decline, I have too many things going on at this stage in my life.
I'll keep in touch and my next critique will be one of your works. ( I'll find the funny side of it.)

J. L. Nav

Louisa,

You're more than welcome! Thank You for the literary inspiration you planted there; it was a great read!

Yes! I am writing as I'm recovering from a dupe and it is a most cherished godsend to have with me on the constant ups and downs.

I'm still learning how to control my will to be so fluent and forward in my beliefs- I hope it doesn't come across as ranting or conducing piousness. : /

I was intrigued when you mentioned your experience, tho, and I love to share that relativity immediately as I hear that door click open.

Your response to each member of the group was beautiful! You truly touched us all, I'm sure - I was struck when I posted my critique just after you wrote, and then you went ahead and spoke to me. Loved, I felt.
I appreciated reading that, as well, stranger!

what a lovely message for us all in the ffff group, louisa. beautiful. *hug*
thank you!

hi, louisa--
thanks for the critique! i was having fun playing with the bits of irony in the story, so i'm glad you enjoyed it, too.
i'm happy to see you're in the ffff circle! woohoo!!

Invite sent. If you are ready you can jump in today with your first work. Or you can wait till next week. Whichever works for you.
-Ben

Hello Louisa,

Thank you for your thoughts on my old poem. I don't think that person is completely gone. He's just a little happier now. Although I still struggle with similar issues. I appreciate your critique. It wasn't typical, but it showed a genuine response to the piece. Which is the best I could ask for. So again, thanks.

-Ben