I did sort of disappear, huh? Looks like you've been gone for awhile too. I started classes a few weeks ago, and a new job, so it's been pretty crazy. Honestly, I haven't written a thing since the June extravaganza. I think I was a little burnt out. That was exhausting. Just yesterday I decided it was time. I need to write something. You'll be the first to know when it's done. Or started for that matter...
How are things with you? Writing, or otherwise.
--dnm

Hey, thanks for reading the story. I was starting to worry. You disappeared for a bit. Anyway, thanks for the feedback. It was definitely helpful. I see what you mean about distancing in the beginning. Feel free to read my other June Challenge pieces. They're sort all over the place as far as style and subject matter. I'm trying to use this challenge to write things I normally wouldn't. I'm definitely looking for people's thoughts if you get a chance. Oh, and publish something new so I can read it
--dnm

Howdy - I'm not sure if you've been following our little June Challenge, but I was wondering if you might be willing to read something. It's the secnod chapter of my June Challenge piece. I was looking for smoe feedback on "The Typewriter." I'm about the least descriptive writer in existence, so I thought I'd try writing something with a few adjectives. If you get a chance, I'd like to know what you think. Thanks --dnm

Louise - Just wanted to let you know I haven't forgotten you I'm sorry I haven't had time to re-read your story. I should get a chance tomorrow at work. Summer classes just started. Yuck.
Hope all is well,
-dnm

I'm busy the next few days, but I will come back to look at Vigil Auntie again, I promise

I published something called "You notice." I was wondering if you could read it when you get a chance and let me know what you think (and if it makes sense..). It's a very rough draft.
Hope all is well.

Thanks for re-reading my piece. I really appreciate the feedback. Sometimes I write crazy-sounding stream of consciousness poetry, and I can never tell if it's even comprehensible to others.

Thank you for your critique of my poem Three: Isness. Now that I have an upgraded membership, I was able to do some formatting to fix an obvious point of view problem that was causing a lot of confusion. I was wondering if you would re-read it and let me know what you think.