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Would love to read some of your work, however every time I am re-routed back to this same page.
Best of luck, you Appear very interesting and your comments are witty and hold merit to your ability to be aware of emotions and personal passions. Cheers to you little stranger, will keep my eyes out for the Unlocking of your expressed words.
Mandi,
Tocana Nights was the best work I've read. If you like to check my song "Lonely heart" that'll be cool. Peace.
Hey Mandi, I reread my crit for your poem and I think it came off as a little harsh. I just wanted to say that I didn't mean it to be-- you've clearly got the talent, and now I'd like to see you develop it further keep up the writing!
Thank you! I noticed all of the Jane Austen on your bookshelf.. I'm starting on Pride and Prejudice now!
Hello Mandi. I have read your work Give Me a Monet and thought that it was great, but also I want you to read the work that is posted on my profile called Heart of Ice. It is unfinished but enjoy, it because I will publish this work in stores someday. And as a treat it contains an excerpt of a christmas story at the end of the story that I am not done with! Take care and I hope you enjoy it!
As a birthday present you should write another poem. <3 <3 <3
I figured out the quoty thingy earlier today when I clicked on the... quotes... on the critique page. /facepalm
Nah, not really the "whole" time. Just some of it. The other part was making Kennytoga watch Meet Joe Black. BTW, if you are super bored you should just come over before we head out to the Theater later. I am at home now.
Thanks for your great critique! I really appreciate it!
What a nightmare! YUCK!!! Sorry you had to try the fish-fin chips!
Name: Amanda Hanson
Sex: Female
Location: North Dakota
Birthday: Oct 22, 2008
Words Written: 5,815
Hottest Words: day, time, life, years, love, night

About Mandi

Occupation: I'm a college student at the moment. Looking at a career in Graphic Communications. Right now I work at a liquor store, serving people their false happiness and pipe dreams. (a.k.a. 40's and box wine. Hah.)
About Me: Not much to tell really. I'm 23. I am way too interested in everything. I'm a walking contradiction, I pretend to be a writer, and musician. Just trying to get some enjoyment out of this thing we call life.
Interests: Writing, reading, music, singing, computers, graphic communications, chatting, going out to eat with friends and just hanging out.
Publications: None.
Favorite Books: Anything by Jane Austen, "Diary: A Novel" by Chuck Palahniuk, Fyodor Dostoevsky's "The Brothers Karamazov, " the Harry Potter series, the Dark is Rising series by Susan B Cooper, "Wicked" by Gregory McGuire, and many many many more...
Favorite Movies: 10 Things I Hate About You, O Brother Where Art Thou, Pi, The Big Lebowski, Benny & Joon, Identity, Walking Tall, The Rundown, Harry Potter, and way more I'll add later.
Favorite TV Shows: I have a sad compulsion towards reality TV. Maybe it's because then my life seems normal? Haha. I really like House, and Bones, when I get a chance to watch them.
Favorite Quotes: "Dream like you'll live forever, live like you'll die today"
Loves: mexican, chinese, and italian food. amazing friends. overuse of periods and ellipses in profile information. sarcasm and wit. monty python. music. more music. movies. picnics. walks in the rain.
Hates: snow. cold weather. lack of music. being sick. fake people and people who don't have any conscience left in them.
writer's block.

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Bookshelf
Rosencrantz and Guildenstern Are Dead Persuasion (Barnes & Noble Classics) Sense and Sensibility (Barnes & Noble Classics) Persuasion (Barnes & Noble Classics) Sense and Sensibility (Barnes & Noble Classics) Emma (Barnes & Noble Classics) Northanger Abbey (Barnes & Noble Classics)

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Latest Works

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Just a random poem. Felt the urge to write, and it's not very good, but I figured I'd throw it up for critique anyway. Read →
This work was going to be an entry for the February contest, but it was getting too long and I've realized I don't have time to finish it and then cut it down, so here's the first chapter, at any rate. In this chapter, Mary... a woman in her 50's, r... Read →
A short story I wrote, mostly consisting of the musings of a lonely musician. Read →
Just a little blurb I wrote for fun. Nothing too serious, gotta cut loose now and then! Read →

Latest Critiques and Comments

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On I'm Ready To Leave, by Kyle Morrison: Opening Comments Overall, I liked this piece.  It flows very well in most parts, and is almost sing-song. You definitel... Read →
On A Shade Of Gray, by C. Crone:        Songs unsung nor music play (7)       Too quickly pass then pas... Read →
On Lessons from Elijah, Chapter 1: Starving Artists, by Mandi: Thank you guys for the thorough critiques.  I'm definitely trying to figure out how to implement your suggestions.... Read →
On Goodbye, by Alex Jestin Taylor: sipping tea and speaking of recent weather, Why are you going? I feel that a stronger form of separation is needed here to re... Read →