Mandi,
Tocana Nights was the best work I've read. If you like to check my song "Lonely heart" that'll be cool. Peace.

Hey Mandi, I reread my crit for your poem and I think it came off as a little harsh. I just wanted to say that I didn't mean it to be-- you've clearly got the talent, and now I'd like to see you develop it further keep up the writing!

Thank you! I noticed all of the Jane Austen on your bookshelf.. I'm starting on Pride and Prejudice now!

Hello Mandi. I have read your work Give Me a Monet and thought that it was great, but also I want you to read the work that is posted on my profile called Heart of Ice. It is unfinished but enjoy, it because I will publish this work in stores someday. And as a treat it contains an excerpt of a christmas story at the end of the story that I am not done with! Take care and I hope you enjoy it!

As a birthday present you should write another poem. <3 <3 <3

I figured out the quoty thingy earlier today when I clicked on the... quotes... on the critique page. /facepalm

Nah, not really the "whole" time. Just some of it. The other part was making Kennytoga watch Meet Joe Black. BTW, if you are super bored you should just come over before we head out to the Theater later. I am at home now.

Thanks for your great critique! I really appreciate it!

What a nightmare! YUCK!!! Sorry you had to try the fish-fin chips!

Greetings,
Thank you for your comments they were most helpful! I do wonder though, I am unable to read any of your work and wondered if there was a reason for that? The program tells me I don't have the permissions for that...would you let me know? Have a great day!