On Tomorrow, by Wren Smit:   I'm having to preface all of my poetry critiques by saying I've absolutely no formal academic experience ... » Read more...

On Red Shirt, by Shane Gannaway:  Shane, I was struck by this poem from the opening line.  I understand several critiques of the line "Awkward awkw... » Read more...

On Places From the Center, by Lisette Wood:  I'm commenting because I'm not really qualified to critique a poem, having had very little experience critiquin... » Read more...

On Untitled Story 1, by Carrie Griffin: I really enjoyed the story and was thoroughly drawn by your sharp vocabulary and bitingly self-conscious narration, however, ... » Read more...