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On Places From the Center, by Lisette Wood: Firstly, my favourites:
-The repetition of the vegetables is fun and simple and
therefore very effective. It brings a lightne... » Read more...
On When Courage Breeds Fear, by Ezra Fortune: I really enjoyed the way that this was written. That being said,
I think you aught to explore new vocabulary to expand your r... » Read more...




