Hey, Meris. Have you read Heart of Ice yet?

Hi Meris Yates,
Thanks for taking the time to read my short story and for writing a critique. I appreciate it!
If you have the time, take another look at it. I made some changes that I think might address your concerns. I would love to hear your opinion.
Also, were you expecting it to be more humorous because I added the tag "humor"? If so, I should take that out. Thanks again!

Thanks. I will get to more of the setting on part 2.

Hello, Meris Yates. I am so sorry I haven't written to you in a while. I just got the book Twilight by Stephenie Meyer today and I will do fan fiction of it sometime soon. But for now, you can find my works on my profile and if you want, you can become a fan. Take care!

Thanks. When Breaking Dawn comes out somtime soon, I make a fan fiction of that! Good luck on writing your works. Maybe you ought to do a fan fiction of Stephenie Meyer's books too.

Thanks for your comment. Actually when you said about the note Edward wrote, it should say Edward in the end of it. I will also make another fan fiction based from New Moon by Stephenie Meyer. Also, click my name, scroll down for recently published works read and critique them. I am looking forward to you critiquing upon my works and writing a reply on my scratchpad! Take care!