On Moving Target, by Laurie Paulsen:  I liked this poem and appreciate the subject matter.  This is coming from someone who is young, but has been throu... » Read more...

On The Lost Soul's Dance, by Caroline Lowe:  I like the poem's metaphors and imagery, especially the idea of this girl's angelic dancing contrasted to "the ... » Read more...

On High Tide, by Laurie Paulsen:  I like how the poem begins with the idea of nature threatening life, suggesting the end of life (Low tide is turni... » Read more...

On Intangible Concrete, by Vincent Slade:  I understand what this poem is getting at; however, there are a few lines that confuse me.  I think the main reaso... » Read more...

On The House that Life Built, by Tamara Bowman:  It took me a couple times reading this poem to understand the meaning and to be able to relate to it.  I liked the... » Read more...

On No Stupid Questions, by Ben Jacobson:  This piece is an interesting mix of self-deprecation and disgust with life contrasted against the backdrop of a potenti... » Read more...

On Tell Me What You See, by James Barger:  I liked this poems style as a flight of ideas.  I agree with many aspects of your discontent.  The line "I... » Read more...

On Internal Eternal Questions, by Tamara Bowman:  This is full of Existential angst...and that is a good thing.  I also like the style: basic prose in the form of s... » Read more...

On Questions, by Natalie Addison:  The poem is executed well' however, it is an overdone subject.  An overdone subject may make the poe... » Read more...