Hi Michelle! Happy Wednesday!
I just read 'n critiqued STOCKHOLM SYNDROME (umm, I think I called it "EXTRACTION" in my review, ooops!!)...Great work! I'm looking forward to reading more!
Have a beautiful day, from your Fan in beautiful Snohomish, Washington!

Candy Buddah

Glad if I helped! Hope you can continue to beat back that pesky block. Sometimes I find it's best to just write even if you think whatever you're writing sucks. I've done that a couple times and been pleasantly surprised by people's reactions to it.

Thanks for taking the time to read and critique my poem, I really appreciated it and I'm glad you liked it, it's good to know.

Thanks for your critique of the first half of the prologue. Chapters 1-5 (actual chapters, which I'll call Parts on here) will be coming over the next few weeks as soon as I finish rewriting them I'm glad you liked it! And I'm glad you liked Vista as well

that's not nerdly at all.
hey, did you know about the review queue? if you're looking to earn a fast bunch of karma points, review new works in the queue on the main page--i look forward to seeing your new work.

hi, michelle--
thank you for your wonderful comments about my retribution story. i have to tell you, you made my day!
(i'm also marvelling a bit at your profile picture--is that a painting?)
thanks again for lifting my spirits!

Hi! Glad you liked the bengay story. To be honest, I have no idea where the Toostie Roll thing came from...maybe it seemed like a good dancing tranny name? I donno. Your gues sis as good as mine!

Hi Erin,
Thank you for your review of my poem.
Jaya H.

Thanks for reading my story and leaving your thought. I'm glad you found it inspiring and I hope it helps you through your rough time.