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On Lo Family Payoff, by Frank Neuman: Opening Comments I think your basic idea is great, though rough.  I'm not sure I agree with <a href= "../../../a... » Read more...
On The Cafe', by Dylan Moody: Wow. I have to admit, I didn't know what to expect, but this is a great, very sweet story. Sad, too, but I really feel th... » Read more...