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On Tragic Hearts, Chapter 3: A Twist of Fate, Love, and Lies, by Ariadne President: this was very good. it seems i have read something
from you before about these 2.
the story has a good setting , ... » Read more...
On Thy Heart Belongs to Me, by C. Crone: i really loved your poem though it was a little
short , would have been nice had it been longer
it was a pleaser... » Read more...
On Heart Break, by Ariadne President: This was a very nice story . I felt sorry for poor
Belle. The only thing I didnt understand was ,
why was he not... » Read more...
On Taking A Chance?, by CJ Jayne: the idea of this poem is great and the flow is not to
bad just a little choppy in some places.
but you had your r... » Read more...
On Flowers For My Love, by C. Crone: This was a good poem , it was sweet made me smile until it came
to the end and I wanted
to cry. you had a good fl... » Read more...
On Old Fishermen Never Die -- They Just Smell That Way, by Joe Phelps: I love this story. danny seemed like a very good man. I
laughed on some parts and felt tears
in my eyes when he died. b... » Read more...
On Boomerang, by Bob Onnie: I really enjoyed reading your poem. your poem has a
nice flow .
I didn't understand what the hole thing was a... » Read more...
On Appearances, by K. L. Raynor: Wow!. This poem was very good. The way your words
flow is just wonderful. this
poem made me want to read on. ... » Read more...
On Late Night Visitor, by Ink Weaver: I loved this poem , I read it 2 times. it made me think of
my grandma , she died of lung cancer
she was like a mother t... » Read more...
On The Wind And The Willow, by C. Crone: this was a very nice poem. A little patchy with its flow
but it was very nice.
the way you express the lonelyness of t... » Read more...
On The Relief of Writing, by Joe Phelps: this was very diffrent , but well writen, but
its kind of hard to follow when all the words run on the
way t... » Read more...
On Jazz Night, by J Charles Silko:
listening to old men
grinding out a living
and living a love
You just need to change the living and ... » Read more...
On BOUND, by Bianca: A heart once as soft
as Scottish highland heather
has turned to the texture
of tanned Texan leather flowed ,
I really l... » Read more...
On There sex life, by Chelsi Brown: I think this poem could really be great , the format is
not right but if you fix the format
so the words dont all... » Read more...
On tears, by missunderstood: how about this for an ending " I look at myself in the
mirror and wonder how
I will go on."
... » Read more...
On Broken Wing, by FireFly747: I like your poem , and you said it very nicely "a
poem is like a bird."
(a poem is your emotion), "with a broken ... » Read more...
On My Beauty, My Protection, by Grace Claudia: this is a very intresting piece. I read this it
reminds me of the kind of person I use to be.
never thinking I was... » Read more...
On The Fish Plastique, by Allie Hueperts: this was very intresting , the way you talked about the
fish floating in the bowl, I can remember
my boys waking up in... » Read more...