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Showing 14 of 17 critiques and comments.
On Cooking Dinner Alone, by Lisette Wood: This is a bit overdue. Trying to get back on track with
the schedule and whatnot.
I don't have a whole lot to say a... » Read more...
On Things My Sister Taught Me, by Carrie Griffin: Here is that critique I mentioned earlier, as you might have
surmised by the "critique" label on this thing somewhere, making... » Read more...
On Things My Sister Taught Me, by Carrie Griffin: Hey! Cool, well written story! Will post more very
soon. Sorry for the lateness.
... » Read more...
On The Comforts of Fiction, by K. McCrae: A boy who daydreams a lot? I don't know anything
about that..... (stares off into space for a good long while... » Read more...
On Tomorrow, by Wren Smit: Howdy! I generally liked this piece, and would have
to agree with what other people have already said in that I w... » Read more...
On Leaves, by Arday Urthona: I thought this was pretty neat. It seemed to relate
to old, epic - y (I'm sure that could be a word), fantasy... » Read more...
On Poem, by Rush Hannity: I like how the poem starts off, because
Relaxing Deception
suggests a lot of things at once, because relaxed ... » Read more...
On The Last Noel, by N. Adam Edwards: Soooo..... I am not really sure what to say here.
Anyhoo, I mostly like it so far, even if some of the puns are
c... » Read more...
On Hamm, by Manfred Tooley: And here it is.
As far as the content/ plot of the story goes, I enjoyed
it. Now I don't know much... » Read more...
On Red Shirt, by Shane Gannaway: Howdy, Shane! I liked the poem in general, but I
felt it was strongest when not broken up. The imagery is
c... » Read more...
On Three Minutes, by Carl Antonowicz: Well, I am not really sure what to think of it, but it
does have some cool imagery that caught my eye. I can'... » Read more...
On Places From the Center, by Lisette Wood: I was a bit stumped on this one. I definently like
the imagery and some of the strong word, sound, things you are... » Read more...
On Untitled Story 1, by Carrie Griffin:
Hmmm….. I have never critiqued
something formally, so I am just going to write what I
think. I hope it amounts ... » Read more...