oops! i lied- i wrote the critique on fighting with anxiety

i critiqued your poem "notes on leaves" i hope that it will help!!
~Fainne
ps: read my works!! click my name and scroll down to read them!! 2 novel starts, and a poem

So, it's me, not you. Hopefully the problem will be fixed soon.

Hey there. I've read both chapters and have just a few suggestions, but can't leave any critiques. Do you have it restricted or is something else going on. By the way, I like the work you've done. Let me know what's what and I'll fully explain.

I really enjoyed your story and I look forward to reading more. And you're not a loser for commenting, you're actually my first commenter, so yay!! =)

Hey, nightmare. I'd love to take a look at both chapters and promise I will when I get this remodeling project tied up. Tonight! I prime walls. But I'll get to it soon, I promise.

hi, nightmare--
thanks so much for reading my story! i'm glad you liked it, too--yay! i appreciate your comments--they're the best kind of feedback i could get.

I'm glad I could be of help. I'm excited to see what you do with it and will reread the first chapter when time is free.

I have Tragic Hearts Chapter 1: Black Heart of Temptation and Deceit done, so read and critique it!

Hi! I have edited most of Chapter 3 now so you can read it. Also the plot was Dawn quickly falls in love with Dahlia. Read and critique and tell me what you think about it. I am planning on publishing this book, so please I want the most honest comments onb how good it is. In fac, I would even want my book to become a possible besteller!