oops! i lied- i wrote the critique on fighting with anxiety

i critiqued your poem "notes on leaves" i hope that it will help!!
~Fainne
ps: read my works!! click my name and scroll down to read them!! 2 novel starts, and a poem

So, it's me, not you. Hopefully the problem will be fixed soon.

Hey there. I've read both chapters and have just a few suggestions, but can't leave any critiques. Do you have it restricted or is something else going on. By the way, I like the work you've done. Let me know what's what and I'll fully explain.

I really enjoyed your story and I look forward to reading more. And you're not a loser for commenting, you're actually my first commenter, so yay!! =)

Hey, nightmare. I'd love to take a look at both chapters and promise I will when I get this remodeling project tied up. Tonight! I prime walls. But I'll get to it soon, I promise.

hi, nightmare--
thanks so much for reading my story! i'm glad you liked it, too--yay! i appreciate your comments--they're the best kind of feedback i could get.

I'm glad I could be of help. I'm excited to see what you do with it and will reread the first chapter when time is free.

I have Tragic Hearts Chapter 1: Black Heart of Temptation and Deceit done, so read and critique it!

Hi! I have edited most of Chapter 3 now so you can read it. Also the plot was Dawn quickly falls in love with Dahlia. Read and critique and tell me what you think about it. I am planning on publishing this book, so please I want the most honest comments onb how good it is. In fac, I would even want my book to become a possible besteller!

Both chapters 1 abd 3.

Hello. I have made chapter one of broken angel into different characters and it is a whole lot clearer. Go read it now and critique. Tell me how it is!

Hello. I have just edited some of chapter one, broken angel for you. Go back and read it. You can tell me how it is right now. Right now, because someone lowly critiqued my work and I need that special someone to cheer me up...

Thanks for the critique, and no offense was taken I like writing wierd fantasy. I tried reading Eragon, and to be honest, found it utterly horrible. Paolini is on my list of people I never want to write like, lol.

Thanks for the compliments and encouragement. I pretty much only write fantasy, though I swing between fantasy romance and fantasy adventure. Thanks again!

Thanks a lot for the critique! I really appreciate it, I found it very helpful!

Oh, and btw, the typo at the end was me being dumb with copy and paste, thank you for pointing it out! Also, the periods and commas and whatnot was something my poetry teacher told me. I hate grammar, but he said that even though poetic license lets you do whatever you want, it doesn't hurt to put correct grammar in there, so it's not there, necessarily, to help guide the reader as much as it is to make it look more presentable. Thanks a gain nightmare!

Hello, my little nightmare! I liked your story very very much called You Never See It Coming! I also like Twilight, New Moon, and Eclipse too! Come to my profile by clicking my name, scroll down from my profile. You should see the work Broken Hearted Chapter 3: A Twist of Fate, Love, and Lies. Read and critique that work!