N.I. London
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Hey thanks for critiquing my article. It was a lot of help. In fact, after the first critique, I went in and started editing and then saw what she was talking about and absolutely yes you hit the nail on the head too. Thank you again so much, after working on it some more I think I'll have something to be proud of and maybe even submit it to some places. I love this place.
Oh, hello! So you want to publish your works into books? So do I! That is what this site is for! Wanna read my works, just click my name, scroll down to latest works and you should see Passions of a Formerly Lovestruck Black Winged But Tempted Kind of Angel: Sinclair's Story! I guarantee that you will like it and comment on it! Take care with your visit on this site!
Hello, N I London! Welcome to scribophile!
| Name: | Kelly Beale |
| Sex: | Female |
| Location: | VA |
| Words Written: | 2800 |
| Hottest Words: | mark, ring, dominique, table, thought, light |
About Me
| Occupation: | student |
| About Me: | I'm a college student, who is about to graduate. I want to improve my writing before trying to publish. |
| Interests: | reading, writing, watching youtube videos |
| Publications: | student magazine |
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April 23
N.I. London wrote a message for the circle TSC.
April 20
N.I. London commented on Sapphire Bright.
N.I. London edited Sapphire Bright.
April 18
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N.I. London wrote a critique for Untitled ~ Chapter One : Contact, Chapter 1: NO Title yet...The Beginning, by Tamara Bowman.
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April 17
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N.I. London added As Meat Loves Salt (Harvest Original) to her bookshelf.
N.I. London published Sapphire Bright.
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N.I. London replied to the thread Found this accidently.
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This is a short story about a woman with a couple of oddities, the woman's lover who disappeared, a strange man, and a sapphire ring. It has a couple of twists and turns, and the reader has to solve the question of the missing pieces. » Read...
2800 words - 4 critiques
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On Sapphire Bright, by N.I. London: I assumed that copying and pasting would maintain all of my
formatting. This is my first time, so sorry. Please read!
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On The Courage of Jim Hawkins, by Torquil Mann: I enjoyed reading your story and guessing what's going to
happen. You have a lot of potential to bring out more themes or... » Read more...
On Growing Up Girls, by c.a. Marks: Your first paragraph has a very good hook. It made me want to
continue, so very good job there! I think that your prose has m... » Read more...
On Coincidences, Chapter 1: How can I begin to explain?, by Thor Winston: I think that you have a great start to a story. A good
introduction. I think that the narrator's voice is distinctive, bu... » Read more...