Nafeesa
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I got two of your works on my reading list. When I'm done I'll give a critique or two. Peace. Oh yeah, your poems were good, girl!
Thanks for giving me my first critique on Scribophile 
It was really encouraging!
It was really encouraging!
Thank you for your critque of Vigil Auntie! I have updated it, would love it if you are able to take another look...
Again, many thanks for the critique,
Louise
Again, many thanks for the critique,
Louise
Thanks for your critique of "Truth." The (lack of) structure was most decidedly intentional. The line breaks and other aspects were definitely deliberate. I'm glad you were able to pick up on that.
-dnm
-dnm
hi, nafeesa--
welcome to scribophile!
also, thanks for your generous comment on my dead steve story--i appreciate it.
i look forward to reading your work!
welcome to scribophile!
also, thanks for your generous comment on my dead steve story--i appreciate it.
i look forward to reading your work!
| Name: | Nafeesa |
| Sex: | Female |
| Location: | Colorado |
| Birthday: | July 12 |
| Words Written: | 7546 |
| Hottest Words: | filou, eyes, rysan, knew, tymin, lands |
About Me
| Occupation: | university student, part time data entry clerk, and part time on-call manager for a condominium complex |
| Interests: | reading, writing, history, TV, games |
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May 18
Nafeesa wrote on Louise Kuskovski's scratchpad.
Nafeesa deleted Chamomile Tea.
May 17
Nafeesa edited Comatose Prayer.
Nafeesa published Camellia.
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Nafeesa published Chamomile Tea.
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108 words - 3 critiques
This is a short story that is a part of a larger work. A collection of stories where bad things happen and the lead characters are all women named after plants. It's called Garden of Terror. This is Camellia's story. Feedback appreciated. » Read...
2337 words - 3 critiques4881 words - 0 critiques122 words - 1 critiqueLatest Critiques and Comments
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On Clean, Dead Steve, by Laurie Paulsen: This was hilarious! I love dark humor, and I really think you
captured the spur of the moment, "I did it, now I deal with it"... » Read more...
On One Romeo, Two Juliets, by Ariadne President: Opening Comments
Overall, it's a cute little piece. The mix of mythos and the
spatterings of Old English were a little o... » Read more...
On Smiley Face Gang, by Charlotte Clancy: The good:
for me I liked the theme, the darkness, and the topic you chose
to write on. I like how cut and dry it is, not sure... » Read more...
On Taking Time, by Eli Hart: First of all, you did a fantastic job with the rhyme and meter,
it follows Frost very well.
However, one error I did n... » Read more...