have you read Last Evenigns on earth, it's ashort story by Roberto Bolano, really good.

Not a problem at all, Natalie. I was afraid that I might have been dumping a lot of stuff on you at once/ Glad to hear it helped!

You, too, are too nice! And congratulations on winning the July poetry contest! Well done.

woohoo!! big congratulations on your gold trophy, natalie!! lookit you, kicking butt!

you're very welcome, Natalie.
I was glad to respond to your wonderful writing. and I look forward to reading more of what the curious character goes through!

Wow, Natalie! Thanks a lot for the critique. You pointed out some things that I sincerely had never thought about. I am definitely going to use your ideas to full effect in rewriting it. Thank you again!

Wow, thank you a lot, that was a very helpful review 5 stars for you.

hi, natalie--
thanks for your helpful comments on my 'high tide' poem! i appreciate you taking the time to clear up my meter issues.