On Torvald's Troubles - Chapter 1, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith:  This story reminds me of when I was much younger. All my friends and I would hear a rumor that there was treasure burri... » Read more...

On Frog, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith: I have to admit that the fact that it was a frog king was a bit distracting to me. I just feel as though it's a bit too u... » Read more...

On Just a Disabled Little Girl, by karenperalta:  Okay, these are the critiques that I hate to write. You know the type: saying how bad the story was, and what you can d... » Read more...

On Out In The Up Down, by C. Crone:  I'm sorry to say that your wish for "brutal" critisism will not be fufilled in this comment. I think this is great.... » Read more...

On Misplacement, by Stefan Kaiser:  Okay, I can see where you were attempting to go with this. And I must say, it was a good idea. However, when you put th... » Read more...

On Obsessions, Chapter 1, by Joseph Nagy:  Before I praise this work, let me begin the critique. That way I end on a positive note. There are a few places where t... » Read more...

On Keats, by Circus:  This poem is absolutely fantastic! The words, the rhyme, the rhythm. All of it just captured me! "As to project them on... » Read more...

On nightmares, by heidi hoover:  I absolutely LOVE this poem. Reading it the first time I was left stunned by how amazing it was. And the second time re... » Read more...

On Taking Time, by Eli Hart:  Paralyzed by butterflies This is by far my favorite line in the poem. Most people feel butterflies and enjoy it and t... » Read more...

On I Remain., by Isylia:   I like the fact that the poem doesn’t have much of a rhyme scheme or…any at all for that matter. Too many poems no... » Read more...